Poster: Crazyhorse at 4/15/2005 2:10:47 PM PDT Subject: The Murloc is Lonely... Part 2 |
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Part one, for those who care to read (and you will be a bit confused if you don't), can be found here.
http://www.theangrymurloc.com/thelonelymurloc/viewtopic.php?t=4
(the forum ate my part one! boo hiss at the forum.)
For those who are lazy, or would like a quick refresher:
Summary of Part One:
Hundreds of years in the Warcraft future, a mysterious and deadly force named The Law rules in Storm City. When the Law's public representative, Fang the Tooth Murloc, disappears, a vagabond tauren shape-shifter named Horse is sent to investigate. Instead of a body, he finds Fang himself waiting for the young bull. Fang summons him to a meeting of the Argent Dawn, a secret organization dedicated to fighting evil. The Dawn give Horse a quest to travel north to the dead continent of Lordaeron and retrieve a mysterious book. Horse is to be accompanied by a veteran druid, the gender-ambiguous Katy M. Around a campfire, having escaped an unfortunate situation, M fills Horse in on what The Law is: an ancient, guiding force in the universe, which for the last several hundred years has been enforcing peace between the races by holding power in all the large cities in the world. Now, for reasons unknown, even to its agents, the Law is withdrawing from power.[ post edited by Crazyhorse ]
| | | http://forums.worldofwarcraft.com/thread.aspx?fn=wow-general&t=2609484&p=#post2609484 | | | Poster: Caydiem at 5/4/2005 10:03:05 PM PDT Subject: Re: The Murloc is Lonely... Part 2 |
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Q u o t e: I don't think blue likes my story. ;_; I'm glad everyone noticed Heloly's cameo. No one noticed in part one when I dropped "Breakfast is for the weak." Wish I knew who'd said it before I put it in, but unfortunately, the FORUM ATE PART ONE. >.< At any rate, cameos are fun. my boss will be showing up, once they get north. won't say where!
I'm working on the last paper of the semester right now, and it's due Friday, so I don't even get to celebrate cinquo de mayo. After that I should be able to start writing more more often. /em hopes really hard
re: making massive ex post facto edits... eh, the only thing I'd want to do is somehow avoid having the first chapter and a half of part two be one big return to part one's big set piece, and I haven't got any great ideas on how to do that, so forgetaboutit. Also, I'll probably edit last week's contribution to reduce the flippancy with which Crazy and Fang dismiss all the human suffering that's been going on. The one thing I would like to say is that despite the really blatant hints I left in the fight scene at the end of part one, I have no idea what class Fang is going to be. Almost certainly not warlock. I asked 'Tooth what he wanted to be on the forums a while ago, but no response. (blue doesn't like my story ;_; )
*gasp*
You don't think we like your story?
My dear friend, the only reason why we haven't posted on your threads is we didn't want to invite the inevitable train of posts that tends to follow in our wake, and we certainly didn't want you to feel that you must keep going. This is clearly a fun exercise for you, and you've gathered quite a fanbase!
Fangtooth and myself have been anxiously awaiting the next update ever since you began the story. We're positively tickled by it, and while we don't want you to feel obligated to continue should you lose interest, we adore what's come so far.
(EDIT: Fangtooth's primary character is a priest, by the way... if you wanted to know. ;) )[ post edited by Caydiem ]
- Caydiem -
Assistant Community Manager
| | | http://forums.worldofwarcraft.com/thread.aspx?fn=wow-general&t=2609484&p=#post2977458 | Poster: Caydiem at 5/4/2005 10:03:05 PM PDT Subject: Re: The Murloc is Lonely... Part 2 *edited post* |
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Q u o t e: I don't think blue likes my story. ;_; I'm glad everyone noticed Heloly's cameo. No one noticed in part one when I dropped "Breakfast is for the weak." Wish I knew who'd said it before I put it in, but unfortunately, the FORUM ATE PART ONE. >.< At any rate, cameos are fun. my boss will be showing up, once they get north. won't say where!
I'm working on the last paper of the semester right now, and it's due Friday, so I don't even get to celebrate cinquo de mayo. After that I should be able to start writing more more often. /em hopes really hard
re: making massive ex post facto edits... eh, the only thing I'd want to do is somehow avoid having the first chapter and a half of part two be one big return to part one's big set piece, and I haven't got any great ideas on how to do that, so forgetaboutit. Also, I'll probably edit last week's contribution to reduce the flippancy with which Crazy and Fang dismiss all the human suffering that's been going on. The one thing I would like to say is that despite the really blatant hints I left in the fight scene at the end of part one, I have no idea what class Fang is going to be. Almost certainly not warlock. I asked 'Tooth what he wanted to be on the forums a while ago, but no response. (blue doesn't like my story ;_; )
*gasp*
You don't think we like your story?
My dear friend, the only reason why we haven't posted on your threads is we didn't want to invite the inevitable train of posts that tends to follow in our wake, and we certainly didn't want you to feel that you must keep going. This is clearly a fun exercise for you, and you've gathered quite a fanbase!
Fangtooth and I have been anxiously awaiting the next update ever since you began the story. We're positively tickled by it, and while we don't want you to feel obligated to continue should you lose interest, we adore what's come so far.
(EDIT: Fangtooth's primary character is a priest, by the way... if you wanted to know. ;) )
(Edited again for grammar because it was late. Thanks, Malamara.)[ post edited by Caydiem ]
- Caydiem -
Assistant Community Manager
| | | http://forums.worldofwarcraft.com/thread.aspx?fn=wow-general&t=2609484&p=#post2977458 | Poster: Caydiem at 5/4/2005 10:03:05 PM PDT Subject: Re: The Murloc is Lonely... Part 2 *edited post* |
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Q u o t e: I don't think blue likes my story. ;_; I'm glad everyone noticed Heloly's cameo. No one noticed in part one when I dropped "Breakfast is for the weak." Wish I knew who'd said it before I put it in, but unfortunately, the FORUM ATE PART ONE. >.< At any rate, cameos are fun. my boss will be showing up, once they get north. won't say where!
I'm working on the last paper of the semester right now, and it's due Friday, so I don't even get to celebrate cinquo de mayo. After that I should be able to start writing more more often. /em hopes really hard
re: making massive ex post facto edits... eh, the only thing I'd want to do is somehow avoid having the first chapter and a half of part two be one big return to part one's big set piece, and I haven't got any great ideas on how to do that, so forgetaboutit. Also, I'll probably edit last week's contribution to reduce the flippancy with which Crazy and Fang dismiss all the human suffering that's been going on. The one thing I would like to say is that despite the really blatant hints I left in the fight scene at the end of part one, I have no idea what class Fang is going to be. Almost certainly not warlock. I asked 'Tooth what he wanted to be on the forums a while ago, but no response. (blue doesn't like my story ;_; )
*gasp*
You don't think we like your story?
My dear friend, the only reason why we haven't posted on your threads is we didn't want to invite the inevitable train of posts that tends to follow in our wake, and we certainly didn't want you to feel that you must keep going. This is clearly a fun exercise for you, and you've gathered quite a fanbase!
Fangtooth and I have been anxiously awaiting the next update ever since you began the story. We're positively tickled by it, and while we don't want you to feel obligated to continue should you lose interest, we adore what's come so far.
(EDIT: Fangtooth's primary character is a priest, by the way... if you wanted to know. ;) )
(Edited again for grammar because it was late. Thanks, Malamara.)[ post edited by Caydiem ]
- Caydiem - Assistant Community Manager
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